It's Saturday, April 29th, and the Progressive Poem is HERE! April is National Poetry Month, and the wonderful poets of the Poetry Friday community take turns adding lines to a poem that emerges/progresses over the month. This lovely tradition was started by Irene Latham and is currently curated by Margaret Simon. My thanks to both of them for this opportunity. This is my second time to participate, and both times I have signed up for the penultimate line. Whether I'm brave or foolish, it's too late now, the challenge is on...
There are few rules other than the poem must be for children, and previous lines cannot be changed without permission from the poet. So... here we are, almost at the end of the month, and below you can find the poem so far.
My line is added in red at the end. Michelle Kogan will add the last line tomorrow. You can see the list of poets and their websites at the bottom of the page.
Suddenly everything fell into place
like raindrops hitting soil and sinking in.
When morning first poked me, I’d wished it away
my mind in the mist, muddled, confused.
Was this a dream or reality, rousing my response?
The sun surged, urging me to join in its rising,
Rising like a crystal ball reflecting on morning dew.
I jumped out of bed, ready to explore the day.
My feet pull me outside and into the garden
Where lilies and bees weave…but wait! What’s that?
A bevy of bunnies jart and dart and play in the clover.
A dog barks and flash, the bunderstorm is over.
I breathe-brave, quiet. Like a seed,
as the day, foretold in my dream, ventured upon me.
Sunbeams guided me to the gate overgrown with wisteria
where I spotted the note tied to the gate.
As I reached the gnarled gate, pollen floated like fairy dust into my face. Aaah Choo!
Enter, if you must. We’ve been waiting for you.
Not giving the curious note a thought, I pushed the gate open and ran through.
Stopped in my tracks, eyes wide in awe—can this really be true?
Huge mushrooms for tables, vines twined into chairs,
A flutter of fairies filled flowery teawares
With glazed nut cakes and apple blossom tea,
I heard soft whispers from behind a tree. Oh my! They had been “waiting for me!”
Still brave, but cautious, I waited for them.
Forested friends filled the glade. “You’ve arrived! Let the reverie begin!”
I laughed as my bare feet danced across the dew-soaked grass,
matching the beat of paws, claws, and wings—around me, above me.
Tea cakes and hugs, twice all around, then silly games and races 'til the sun slid down
Here are the poets and their links. And now, on to Michelle Kogan for the final line. Take it away, Michelle!
April 1 Mary Lee Hahn, Another Year of Reading
April 2 Heidi Mordhorst, My Juicy Little Universe
April 3 Tabatha, The Opposite of Indifference
April 4 Buffy Silverman
April 5 Rose Cappelli, Imagine the Possibilities
April 6 Donna Smith, Mainely Write
April 7 Margaret Simon, Reflections on the Teche
April 8 Leigh Anne, A Day in the Life
April 9 Linda Mitchell, A Word Edgewise
April 10 Denise Krebs, Dare to Care
April 11 Emma Roller, Penguins and Poems
April 12 Dave Roller, Leap Of Dave
April 13 Irene Latham Live You Poem
April 14 Janice Scully, Salt City Verse
April 15 Jone Rush MacCulloch
April 16 Linda Baie, TeacherDance
April 17 Carol Varsalona, Beyond Literacy Link
April 18 Marcie Atkins
April 19 Carol Labuzzetta at The Apples in My Orchard
April 20 Cathy Hutter, Poeturescapes
April 21 Sarah Grace Tuttle, Sarah Grace Tuttle’s Blog,
April 22 Marilyn Garcia
April 23 Catherine, Reading to the Core
April 24 Janet Fagal, hosted by Tabatha, The Opposite of Indifference
April 25 Ruth, There is no Such Thing as a God-Forsaken Town
April 26 Patricia J. Franz, Reverie
April 27 Theresa Gaughan, Theresa’s Teaching Tidbits
April 28 Karin Fisher-Golton, Still in Awe Blog
April 29 Karen Eastlund, Karen’s Got a Blog
April 30 Michelle Kogan Illustration, Painting, and Writing
Sorry I was late for some of you. I decided to change some words at the last minute... hope you like it.
ReplyDeleteOh dancing, I was hoping for some dancing and on that dewy grass, so soft and lush. Abandon and the newness of this day. Oh the ending. What might I say? What might I write? It's fun to ponder. The magic of a secret garden and a day of delight. Eager to see what Michelle has in store!!! Janet Clare F.
ReplyDeleteIt's really became quite a festive event! I love the double round of goodies and hugs, and it's a very nice line to say aloud. I'm excited to see how Michelle finishes this up.
ReplyDeleteLove the fun and the time taken included, and "twice all around", an exciting aura, Karen! Now I too wonder what's next! Go, Michelle!
ReplyDeleteI love how this poem is ending with joy, joy, joy. The sounds in this line are wonderful.
ReplyDeleteI love "Teacakes and hugs, twice all around"! Our poem is coming to such a joyful end. I can't wait to see the last line!
ReplyDeleteKaren, well done getting to the setting sun, and I love the way you said it "'til the sun slid down." Beautiful and action-packed line.
ReplyDeleteHi Karen, thanks for your inviting line! I'm picking up the closing line tomorrow and want to know if I may add a comma at the end of your line? My email is: michellekogan@michellekogan.com
ReplyDeleteLove the tea cakes and hugs and "till the sun slid down" - such fun!
ReplyDeleteAww! Hugs, games, and races with forested friends! The best!
ReplyDeleteIt's a party! Is it "tea, cakes and hugs (apple blossom tea, glazed nut cakes), or is it teacakes and hugs"? Either way it's inviting!
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DeleteHi Heidi... I guess it should have been teacakes... I liked the flow without a comma.
DeleteMmmm, teacakes! Nice line!
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